Some people argue that it is not wise for and industries to replace its experienced but old workers with new and young yet inexperienced individuals. To what extend do you agree or dis agree?
There are various industries in the world with different activities which are needed different range of workers or employees from young to old age man. But, through this, I believe that industries are likely better to use and replace old age individuals to young and energetic persons.
First and for most, younger employees are more energetic since they are young and vibrant and have huge power to work. They are healthier to comparison old age people and can do hard and dangerous works as in some jobs such as mining, the physical activities are in high level which old people can not tolerate under these work pressure.
In addition, when young people are replaced with old people, they probably have more creativity, because they are more updated. For instance, young graduated of universities are a very freshman and seeking new ideas to make a novel innovation as they are like to achieve fame and reputation.
In contrary, some people argue that industrious old individuals have critical roles in industries due to of acquaintance of them to different aspects of those works and it makes a large time for them to reach this situation. However, this is an important point, I believe the industries can handle this issue. Before the replacement of individuals the old age can transfer their experience to younger men through some workshops or internship under them and prepare Younger people for receiving new positions.
In conclusion, I believe the energy and creativity of young people could be more critical and also useful for industries, although they need to aware from various aspect of works by experienced and old people before retiring them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 474, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Younger) must be used with a third-person verb: 'peoples'.
Suggestion: peoples
...ternship under them and prepare Younger people for receiving new positions. In concl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07636363636 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68590197541 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530909090909 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.0004166649 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.6 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245449027399 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103368466983 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360116465492 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141306334732 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206648175712 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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