Some people argue that we should do research into our family history. Others agree with the view that we should focus on the present and future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
While some people believe that we should study our family history, others suggest that we had better pay full attention to the presence and future. This essay discusses both views and shows preference to the first opinion over the latter one.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that several things in the past do not benefit the prosperity, development and happiness of people in the present and future. For instance, if a kid cannot accept the divorce of their parents and constantly ask questions, be craving for reasons why they broke up and drowning in regret, the kid will be inclined to end up with heavier depression, anxiety regardless of the reasons he/she will get. Moreover, majority of people are now up to their neck with their work just to earn a decent living as the living expenditure has grown exponentially recently while time is limited. Therefore, it is totally understandable for people to move on for a better future without looking back.
On the other hand, since ancestors and family members play a vital role in deciding our genetics, it is utmost important to learn about our antecedents because that knowledge may help us discover our hidden talents, strengths or even our deep down characteristics which are similar to those of our parents or grandparents, fostering higher self-awareness, which will help us live happily. Furthermore, researching about our family history definitely brings us a wonderful feeling of gratefulness and a healthier mentality. One of the most salient examples for this is the case of the “Be grateful” program aiming at a growing number of Vietnamese adolescents who take their current high living standards for granted, inevitably resulting in overwhelming boredom and unfulfillment. This program encourages these youngsters to learn about the hardship that their grandparents went through during the Vietnam war to bring them current peace. As a result, 90% of participants in this program, after only 10 months, are reported to be more content and grateful for their lives than ever before, which is surely beneficial for both their physical and mental development in the present and future.
Notwithstanding the fact that both perspectives have some validity, it seems to me that it is more convincing for people to research thoroughly and meticulously about their family history instead of neglecting the past to just focus on the present and future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2034.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17557251908 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92429188246 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582697201018 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.6943418056 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.5 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.75 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212492014694 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796308991425 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744713637022 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156752418409 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102241472118 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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