Some people believe that advertisements aimed at children have a poor influence on them and can affect their relationship with parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Having too many advertisements being broadcast trying to make children attracted to their products seems to make parents worried. Although both counter parts do have their own contemplations, I believe parents worry is truly right as the kids’ health would get influence by eating unhealthy products and allocating time to play with inappropriate games. Both views will be discussed in this essay.
On one hand, advertisements mostly try to focus on groups of people who easily convince to buy their products. This approach consequently increases the company's income while it is the most fruitful one in comparison with other alternatives. As children are more emotional in terms of persuasion, they would easily get to want goods and toys they see an TV ad. For instance, a kid might even cry to achieve a car he saw on TV despite paying attention to the price or other considerable factors. Subsequently he insists in purchasing that, that mostly would succeed. Therefore, as children are easier to get persuaded and influenced, advertisements mainly depict a policy focusing on these people that furtherly result in better income and reputation.
On the other hand, parents due to transparent repercussions of eating poor nutrition snacks or playing with inappropriate toys which are being exhibited an TV, would feel anxious. It is a reality that many factories do not stick to moral and professional rules while they manufacture goods that are not healthy or at least bring negative results. So, this principle makes parents feel exaggerated wanting to stop their children watching this adds. For instance, if snack which are advertised be scrutinized, nothing worthwhile would be found in the ingredients. Owing to this perspective, parents are not interested witnessing their kids watching advertisements showing fruitless products that would only bring negative implications.
All in all, by increase in advertisement which mainly influence kids, make parents feel insecure as they are aware of negative consequences being clandestine. Even though advertising agencies benefit from this approach, these advertisements are presumed useless or even life threatening as the untransparent effects are elucidated. From my perspective, the range of activity of companies in terms of advertisements should be limited as their products are not worthy enough. In this essay the views of both parts were illustrated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 89, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'buying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'convince' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: buying
...on groups of people who easily convince to buy their products. This approach consequen...
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Line 2, column 494, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Subsequently,
...he price or other considerable factors. Subsequently he insists in purchasing that, that mos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, therefore, while, at least, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2048.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44680851064 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13677839162 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56914893617 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1590112653 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.777777778 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19162144061 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572773012346 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457856460516 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123547945337 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412925430086 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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