many people have lost their interest to governmental job. what is the main reason of this practice?
Vast majority of people opine that acquiring governmental occupations seems not to be beneficial anymore. Even though, by gaining job positions in government many people did experience safety, nowadays this perspective have changed due to restrictions this situation would bring. This essay will discuss about what restrictions there are existing as people employ in such positions.
First, restrictions relating to income appears which people don't find adequate time allocating it to make money by having other money making additional jobs. Clearly, those who got recruited in governmental occupations, should present within official work table otherwise they probably loose their jobs. Under such circumstances, people refuse making money by doing other activities because they just don't want to be fired and in that case money restriction would be noticeable. For instance, my uncle have to go to school as a teacher every day, so he was not able to continue his business as he didn't find proper time to do so. Therefore, sticking to governmental jobs just cause income restrictions because of time shortage it prompt.
Second, lack of vacation is another restriction factor as it is not available when a person is responsible for going to his daily rigid work. In fact, what a outstanding advantage an occupations should have is flexibility, a notion that many jobs would be lack of specially when it is governmental. In such situation employees are not able to plan for a long vacation holiday due to regulations and red edges being announced before, namely if nurses want to go to a trip, they will not be allowed prolonging it more than a week and this is a law they should obey. Owing to vacation restrictions people are not satisfied acquiring official governmental jobs as flexibility doesn't exist in such occupations.
All in all, many groups of people believe that governmental jobs are not highly demanded as it used to be just in case of restrictions it has in both income and vacation scopes. I personally believe this restrictions are making these jobs less wanted and this essay elaborated on why it is like that.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, therefore, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94024294429 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551428571429 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.686269666 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.571428571 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235933956343 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906536772998 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575883558766 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166303401896 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609322037102 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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