Education is the main aspect, which plays a significant role in every student's life. University education gives support to every learner and it will help to get a good job, whereas it is also beneficial to the society. Studying in university gives more knowledge and experience. In my opinion, this type of learning rises the pupil to more chances to rise in the world by placing a gob in good company.
Learning things from any type of colleges will give us same knowledge, but the placements can observe mainly in universities. Most of the organisations think that they can see the intelligent student's only in universities compared to colleges. By this way, some of the companies are not interested to move to colleges. They select the pupil they want only from universities. Moreover, we can learnt most of the knowledge in university compared to colleges, because we can find the higher experienced staff in universities compared to colleges. For instance, The most famous company wants to visit universities rather than colleges. So the job expectation is high in universities.
The more uses in universities are major number of workshops are going on. The pupil can learn new things by their own, if any queries they can visit the help of their tutor. So every student can having the habit of learning by their own. Pupil never depend on others for assignments they can do by their own, In contrast most of the learners in colleges will depend on their tutors. In this way the pupil may become more intelligent. So that the society will contain more educated persons.
In conclusion, the education in university will be helped to both society and learners. The education level is more important for getting a good job. In my opinion, education is more important to every people in society. The best education can be find in universities.
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- Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
- Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
- In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. it is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.To what extent do you agree or dis agree wi 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...which plays a significant role in every students life. University education gives suppor...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ties compared to colleges. By this way, some of the companies are not interested to move to...
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Line 2, column 392, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'learn'
Suggestion: learn
...nly from universities. Moreover, we can learnt most of the knowledge in university com...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...versity compared to colleges, because we can find the higher experienced staff in...
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Line 3, column 434, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the pupil may become more intelligent. So that the society will contain more educated ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90415335463 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84411809659 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476038338658 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6326363584 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0952380952 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9047619048 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202271484318 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709096166573 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691965590055 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151544586117 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908597135884 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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