Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the world’s fuel resources. Do you agree or disagree?
It is thought that restrictions should be imposed on air travel due to grave pollution increase and exhausting fuel resources result from it. While this essay agrees that air travel causes some negative repercussions, the writer also believes that it should not be ban.
On the one hand, air travel causes some disadvantages. Firstly, pollution that is attributed to it is becoming more and more serious. Obviously, people tend to travel more, but their awareness of environmental protection is not high, even sometimes they litter indiscriminately in where they come. Therefore, after each trip, tourists often leave a large amount of rubbish that is made of polymer and plastic in tourist destinations. Secondly, all means of air travel such as helicopters and planes use a massive quantity of fossil fuel, which may cause scarcity of fuel resources in the near future. In fact, this type of transportation uses fuel more than other transportations. Furthermore, air travel emits poisonous gases into the atmosphere and affects air quality due to these fossil fuels.
On the other hand, air travel should not be restricted. The first point is that traveling by airplane is more convenient and faster than using other vehicles such as trains and ships. Obviously, air travel helps people save more time, especially traveling to a different nation. Another point is that he air travel industry creates a lot of jobs for the country. If air travel is restricted, it will have a serious impact on the travel and tourism industry. For example, Airbus and Boeing are the two largest manufacturers of airplanes in the world. They provided nearly half a million jobs in 2019. Thus, if air travel is banned, they will bankrupt and the unemployment rate will increase significantly.
In conclusion, although environmental pollution and using up fuel resources are caused by air travel, bans should not be imposed on this type of transportation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, even so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1746031746 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97281544083 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55873015873 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4557909166 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5555555556 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27777777778 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411773834464 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129641398297 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988599480589 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292510833485 0.151304729494 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773022307824 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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