Some people think Governments should take measures regarding the healthy lifestyle of individuals. Others think it must be managed by individuals. Discuss both sides and give your opinion
A healthy lifestyle helps people increase their lifespan and happier. it is a popular belief that a healthy lifestyle should be managed by the authority. However, some believed that a healthy lifestyle is a choice of an individual. This essay will discuss both of these views.
On the one hand, the government has many policies that help people can improve their health. The first point is that the authority can build numerous equipment for working out in the parks. everyone can do exercise free in there. In addition, the government has the authority to issue policies preventing the use of harmful substances to surrounding people in public areas such as a cigarette. For example, several areas are available for smokers in public places. The authority also goes up the price of tobacco to reduce users.
On the other hand, each individual has to responsible for themselves. Firstly, people can improve easily their health to have a healthy lifestyle. Because each person can be proactive in exercise at any time, anywhere that does not depend on anyone. Moreover, people are diverse, different about food choice, culture or tradition,… Therefore, if each person wants to rise their health, they have to find a suitable way for themselves. The government can not apply all of the policies for everyone.
In my opinion, to increase the healthy lifestyle, the authority must have responsibilities for citizen’s health and individuals also need to rise the health by themselves. although, the government built many public facilities for the community, doing exercise depends on each person.
In conclusion, although the government should have some policies to improve people’s health, it seems to me that in order to have a healthy lifestyle, each individual must be aware of their health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3470790378 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89290343876 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522336769759 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.1606109227 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4444444444 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27777777778 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16656878549 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601953608766 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570853288782 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115224683728 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761527208029 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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