Nowadays,computers cause more problems than benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Although computers are used frequently in the modern world, many people think they have more disadvantages than advantages. In my opinion, I partly disagree with the statement.
On the one hand, electrical devices have many benefits for everyone. Firstly, people can find information easily by a computer which has Internet connection. if people want to discover everything about one famous person such as Donal Trump or Albert Einstein,…, they just search the name on the google by a computer. The second point is that computers can help people work in distance. In fact, there are many people work from home. By using an electrical device, everybody can send emails or documents for their colleagues or their partners. Finally, a computer has many applications to relax. For example, while working in a long time may be make human stress, they can use applications about music or game in their leisure time or they can go shopping online.
On the other hand, there are some undeniable damaging effects. The first point is that using computer can cause health-related problems. In fact, if people use it in a long time, it can lead to short sighted ness for users. Secondly, computer can make more and more people become slackers. Because people only use an electrical device to talk to everyone without going out and they are very rare at mobilization.
In conclusion, however I recognize that computers have some disadvantages, I would argue that using computer has more benefits and it is still necessary in the modern world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0431372549 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76745517592 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576470588235 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.463415727 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.375 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8125 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118608758532 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486003454463 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507914548358 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102870618474 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465693887523 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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