Some people believe that all children should have a pet or an animal to look after. Other people disagree, however, saying that this depends on a child’s circumstances. Consider these opposing views, and give your own opinion.
It is frequently said that in the mordern era young people ought to take care of a pet or an animal for some reason. Whereas other individual hold different view, on the matter and claim that it is happening based on a siutuation of teenager. There are argument on both side of this topical debate, which I will discuss now.
On the one hand, those who believe that a pet can be caring by childrenis good for emotion of both. For example, there are may pets such as cat, dog, frog and so on, we usualy rekon a cat or a dog being a part of family. When children take care a dog as friend they will growing up with a heart warm and love animal. Furthermore, it appears to be true that pets is always on their side and love children. To take an example, I hava a little cat, she is my best friend. In a raining day, she feel my heart was broke for some reason so she step by step with me in a small room, looking at me and make something to make me better.
On the other hand, wide of people do not easily to accept their child have a pet with more fact that they will get an allergic. For instance, a baby which have weak breathing may have problem with cat’s or dog’s hair. Because of that, parents sometime ban the rules that children do not have any pets until they get older. As the last point, it is also true that an annimal should have some sick can be attack people health. A good example of this is rabies deases.
To sum it up, it appears to me that the strong argument is people should give a chance for children to look after a pet. A lovely pets will be friends, family and on their side if they are in some danger siutuation, also can make them being a warm heart person to know caring everything.
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- Some people believe that all children should have a pet or an animal to look after Other people disagree however saying that this depends on a child s circumstances Consider these opposing views and give your own opinion 56
- Some people believe that all children should have a pet or an animal to look after Other people disagree however saying that this depends on a child s circumstances Consider these opposing views and give your own opinion 53
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'grow'
Suggestion: grow
...ren take care a dog as friend they will growing up with a heart warm and love animal. F...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 492, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'feels'.
Suggestion: feels
...s my best friend. In a raining day, she feel my heart was broke for some reason so s...
^^^^
Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...a pet with more fact that they will get an allergic. For instance, a baby which have weak b...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, may, so, whereas, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.14925373134 5.12529762239 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13997582863 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528358208955 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7783786732 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.875 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226025467449 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077673985905 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644804834458 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152011276713 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525087244537 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.79 12.4159519038 55% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'grow'
Suggestion: grow
...ren take care a dog as friend they will growing up with a heart warm and love animal. F...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 492, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'feels'.
Suggestion: feels
...s my best friend. In a raining day, she feel my heart was broke for some reason so s...
^^^^
Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...a pet with more fact that they will get an allergic. For instance, a baby which have weak b...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, may, so, whereas, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.14925373134 5.12529762239 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13997582863 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528358208955 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7783786732 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.875 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226025467449 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077673985905 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644804834458 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152011276713 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525087244537 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.79 12.4159519038 55% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.