Some people believe all the wild animals should be protected while others think only some animal need to be saved. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The animals of the world exist for their own reasons and they are the part of our ecosystem. If something happens to our ecosystem it will create many problems. Hence, I strongly believe that,all the animals should be protected.
Of course wild animals are the part of our ecosystem and they have as much as share we have on earth. It is painful to say that, due to deforestation and over exploitation of resources people do harm to our nature which leads to loss of natural inhabitants for many wild animals. Since, humans are the main reason for the extinction of these animals, it is our responsibility to protect them to maintain the balance of our nature. Government has already initiated lots of wild animal protection laws and programmes to prevent the threat from humans towards them. But it should be followed very strictly.
On the other hand, a few people believe that, only the endangered species should be protected by government. Because they think if we protect every wild animal obviously the number will be increased. These overpopulation leads to many issues, for instance, even though zebra's are not an endangered species which was protected in Africa, then due to overpopulation of zebra, many farmlands got destroyed. Moreover, government has to spend a huge amount of money to save all animals. It may fail to meet the basic need of people on earth.
To summarize this topic, I would like to emphasize that, every animal should be protected irrespective of their extinction on the world.If we started to protect every wild animal then there is no point to think about endangered species separately. Let us follow the laws which protects animals and thereby maintain the balance of our ecosystem.
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ective of their extinction on the world.If we started to protect every wild animal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, then, as to, for instance, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95517241379 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75233119222 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534482758621 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3378696398 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279583373471 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105039840069 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083203516211 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184909940872 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443963066535 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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