Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as clothes, foods and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
these days children have more freedom when it comes to making decisions about their daily problems such as looks, meals, and activities. According to some, this will lead to a society full of self-centred individuals, as it will be hard for children to communicate with others and make proper choices for the community. And there may be some merit in this view. Yet, in what follows it will be argued that minors should have a right to make their own choices, since this will prepare them to face the upcoming challenges and they will be more competitive in the future.
it is necessary for children to have their opinion about any issue that concerns them, as this way they will have fewer difficulties to make important decisions in the future. Many studies have shown that people, whose opinions were taken into consideration during their childhood, have achieved a lot as adults. For instance, children who are involved in their everyday matters have a clear idea their preferences. Therefore, they will choose their professions easily. Another positive aspect of making own choices is that one will be able to compete in her future career. Nowadays, the job market recruitments have high standards, and in order to fit in these, it is crucial to be competitive and creative.
On the other hand, others say that allowing children to take part in their daily decision-making process might be the cause of having egocentric generation. they think that these children will emphasize their own desires and it will be hard for them to accept other’s opinions. Thus, this can make it difficult for them to cooperate with others. Moreover, this can be detrimental for the community as well, since having a society of individuals who prioritize their wished can lead to making wrong decisions.
In conclusion, it was demonstrated that minors ought to play a significant role in their daily matters, since this will be helpful for them in the future, when they will be forced to make critical choices and will make them be more competitive for the job market. Though some people believe that this will make children more selfish and society will lose, still, the benefits of allowing children to make their own decisions greatly outweigh it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 7.85571142285 280% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06117021277 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65890284073 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492021276596 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3554220439 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.9375 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255819508145 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104323960436 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732665648563 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181201926634 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191643299741 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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