Some people believe that beauty is most important in life while others think that it is the talent that matter.
Some people believe that beauty is most important in life while others think that it is the talent that matter.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are many aspects which influence the life but certain people consider physical appearance is most essential for life while opposite viewers reckon talent is important than that. This essay will discuss both views and my view in subsequent paragraphs.
There are many aspects which influence the life but certain people consider physical appearance is most essential for life while opposite viewers reckon talent is important than that. This essay will discuss both views and my view in subsequent paragraphs.
To embark upon, there are myriad reason why people think beauty is vital but this essay will explain only main reason. First and foremost is that, if people have good appearance, well dressing sense and some experience then they can get jobs easily because these things show their confidence towards other people. As a result, they can achieve great success earlier than other. For example, model's and actresses who are very beautiful and they get higher success because of their beauty. People attract from the appearance of actress. When models give advertisements of any product then people buy that product and don't care about the quality and harmful effects of that product.
On the other hand, no doubt talent is very important for gaining any type of success because when people have talent then they do work with full concentration and hard work with full determination. Hence, they can get success in their dream field. For instance, Barack Obama, is the first black president of America, because of his talent he got a great success in his life. So that's why beauty doesn't matter to get higher success in life. Moreover, there are many people who get name and fame owing of their talent not with good appearance. Consequently, they have proved that point, success doesn't depend upon the good appearance.
As far as l know, both are important because some experts say that " first impressions is the last impression ".
In epilogue, although beauty is important but we cannot ignore the talent because if people have only good appearance but no knowledge about general things at that time beauty will be useless then talent and knowledge do work there.
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- Some people believe that beauty is most important in life while others think that it is the talent that matter.Some people believe that beauty is most important in life while others think that it is the talent that matter. Discuss both views and give your 56
- Some people believe that beauty is most important in life while others think that it is the talent that matter.Some people believe that beauty is most important in life while others think that it is the talent that matter. Discuss both views and give your 73
- Some people believe that beauty is most important in life while others think that it is the talent that matter.Some people believe that beauty is most important in life while others think that it is the talent that matter. Discuss both views and give your 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, no doubt, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12188365651 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39355057141 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484764542936 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6028964962 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.722222222 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0555555556 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61111111111 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335109689769 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983436741877 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706194027668 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182725811066 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738238110583 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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