Some people believe that beauty is most important in life while others think that it is the talent that matter.
Some people believe that beauty is most important in life while others think that it is the talent that matter.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is no doubt that physical appearance has more important for reaching highest position in the life but few people think that person cannot do anything without talent .Iwill discuss both points of view before reaching at any conclusion.
To start with ,physical appearence has plethora of benefits because it give good looks to the person.for instance, when individual go for the job interview in the hospital,school,colleges so that time well maintain dress helps to get the better salary job .Moreover , if person have the excellent appearence they can deveolp their personality and the confidence .they can speak everywhere without any reluctant.
However ,talent shows more good points of view regarding success in the life .Talent makes a person to the active ,intelligent and capable to the fight with struglling life.for example ,jackma is the short height person .with the talent,he become the big businessman in the japan .so that we say talent is the power who person wear he definitely climb the ladder in their life.
To conclusion ,physical appearence is essentail to reach the way of success in the life but we cannot ignore the talent which hide from the own heart
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- Some people believe that beauty is most important in life while others think that it is the talent that matter.Some people believe that beauty is most important in life while others think that it is the talent that matter. Discuss both views and give your 56
- Some people believe that beauty is most important in life while others think that it is the talent that matter.Some people believe that beauty is most important in life while others think that it is the talent that matter. Discuss both views and give your 56
- Some people believe that beauty is most important in life while others think that it is the talent that matter.Some people believe that beauty is most important in life while others think that it is the talent that matter. Discuss both views and give your 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, well, for example, for instance, no doubt, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 194.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12886597938 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90037971624 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654639175258 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.79786151 49.4020404114 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 248.75 106.682146367 233% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.5 20.7667163134 234% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.25 7.06120827912 372% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162507133114 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106155763191 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712895671793 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106155763191 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712895671793 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.0 13.0946893788 206% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 22.76 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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