Some people believe bicycles have a lot of advantages, whereas others believe bicycles have more disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
In the contemporary society, various transport system such as bicycles, trains and cars is developing year by year. If we say about using bicycle transport, there are a lot of beneficial sides. As a meanwhile, others believe bicycles have negative sides. It would be one of debatable issues, so, in the following paragraphs I will debate both of them and demonstrate my views.
On the one hand, majority people prefer to use bicycles. For this reason, there are several benefit sides of using bikes. First of all, bicycles are useful for human’s health. Second of all, they pollute fresh air. Behind the reason, bicycle do not spent any petrol. Last, but not least, riding bicycles can be more affordable rather than other transport vehicles.
On the other hand, riding bicycles on the big road or in the big cities can cause accidents. In other words, on the big cross roads, riding bicycles may be dangerous. Additionally, in different kinds of weather people cannot ride bicycle.
I, personally, believe that riding bicycles can be more useful than other vehicles, although I count some drawbacks of bicycles using. Because, for people’s health, country’s environment and on the road’s traffic congestion would be beneficial riding bike.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that many people claim that bicycles using is more useful, meanwhile, others suggest that there are negative sides of using bike. From my point of view, bicycles have great deal of positive sides rather than negative effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, while, such as, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.148 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71151913141 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3274352545 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7058823529 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7058823529 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279454797708 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941245926325 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925649913456 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157240463433 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312589344365 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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