Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
These days, it is believed by some that it is necessary for the state to prevent children from using phones in school day, while others claim that they need to be accepted to use their phone. Both view are reasonable, but personally I lean toward the latter.
On the one hand, it is understandable why some people avocate the authorities instituting a cell phone ban to children during the school day. To begin with, getting the notifications from cell phone applications could cause distractions. This is because students might forget to turn off their phones in class, and ringing noises or text message alerts disrupt learning and school work. Additionally, cell phones can be used for bullying and can have a negative effect on mental health. Many studys show that social networks such as TikTok, Instagram or Facebook can add to the spread of rumors and misinformation, which can be used for cyberbullying.
On the other hand, I am convinced that it is more benefical for children to use cellphones in school. Firstly, cellphones can be used when help is needed. In fact, as this generation of children has grown up with more kidnapping case and mass shootings, and specifically school shootings, if they were in danger, they can reach the authorities or a medical provider. Secondly, using cellphones helps children create social connections. By widespread social media, children can text, keep in touch, make plans or even discuss homework assighnment, which could improve their communication and teamwork skills.
In conclusion, although there may be some reasons to support the cellphone should be banned by the government from children in school, I believe that allowing children to use phone would gain more advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reasonable, but personally I lean toward the latter. On the one hand, it is und...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12720848057 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88582485895 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604240282686 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0021770235 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.615384615 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.436416472186 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151504426766 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121173644601 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30658429139 0.151304729494 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101799503347 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.