Theseday , it is believed that coummunicating by speaking is better than by writing . Athough , this idea is reasonable to some extent , I would argue that using letter or message more popular .
• On the one hand , I am convinced that people should spend time writing letter or message. Firstly , Spoken communication can take many time of people . When spoken communication is used too much , people don not have time to work or study. For example, if I want to meet and talk to my friend , I have to spend many hours going to coffee shop and go back home .Secondly , people can easily save memory with written communication . When people communicate by writing letter or sending message , all of content of conversation are saved and everyone can watch them everytime.Example ,when I have free time but I can’t talk to my friend , I often read all of letter I used to receive from my friend.
• On the other hand , it is understandable why spoken communication is choosed by many people .On top of that , many people are usually lazy when use written communication. After busy hours at company , it is extremely tired if everyone have to use keyboard or pen to write message or letter . In fact , If I finish my study at school , I really prefer to meet my friend at coffee shop to write message.Furthermore , Everyone would have more chance to meet each other if people use spoken communication so the relationship is more close .
In conclusion , there may be some reasons to support people keeping in touch by calls or meeting, i strongly believe that this policy is not without drawsbacks and thus should not be implemented by the state.
- Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones Why is this case Do you think this is a positive or negative development 61
- Many young people today choose or are forced to go and work abroad What are the advantages disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country compared with living and working in your own country Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
- Many young people today choose or are forced to go and work abroad What are the advantages amp disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country compared with living and working in your own country Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Some people believe that university students should pay for their tuition fees because university education only benefits students themselves not society as a whole To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- The maps below show information about the change of Riverage college 30 years ago and now 90
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Theseday , it is believed that coummunicating by...
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Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
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Suggestion: many times
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78521126761 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92880069402 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524647887324 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.5048819783 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.545454545 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5454545455 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 43.0 5.01903807615 857% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157320192685 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717900408957 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551384682332 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872925665716 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522684321916 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Theseday , it is believed that coummunicating by...
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Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Theseday , it is believed that coummunicating by speaking is better t...
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...ay , it is believed that coummunicating by speaking is better than by writing ....
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...lieved that coummunicating by speaking is better than by writing . Athough , th...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
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... by speaking is better than by writing . Athough , this idea is reasonable to so...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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...ing is better than by writing . Athough , this idea is reasonable to some extent ...
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..., this idea is reasonable to some extent , I would argue that using letter or mes...
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...able to some extent , I would argue that using letter or message more popular . ...
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...at using letter or message more popular . • On the one hand , I am convinced...
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...ge more popular . • On the one hand , I am convinced that people should spen...
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Suggestion: many times
...irstly , Spoken communication can take many time of people . When spoken communication i...
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...mmunication can take many time of people . When spoken communication is used too m...
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... if I want to meet and talk to my friend , I have to spend many hours going to cof...
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...rs going to coffee shop and go back home .Secondly , people can easily save memor...
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...o coffee shop and go back home .Secondly , people can easily save memory with wri...
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...coffee shop and go back home .Secondly , people can easily save memory with writt...
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...y save memory with written communication . When people communicate by writing lett...
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...ate by writing letter or sending message , all of content of conversation are save...
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...d and everyone can watch them everytime.Example ,when I have free time but I can’t talk...
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Suggestion: ,
...veryone can watch them everytime.Example ,when I have free time but I can’t talk t...
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... free time but I can’t talk to my friend , I often read all of letter I used to re...
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...r I used to receive from my friend. • On the other hand , it is understandable...
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... from my friend. • On the other hand , it is understandable why spoken communi...
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... communication is choosed by many people .On top of that , many people are usually...
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...ommunication is choosed by many people .On top of that , many people are usually l...
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...s choosed by many people .On top of that , many people are usually lazy when use w...
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...mmunication. After busy hours at company , it is extremely tired if everyone have ...
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Suggestion: .
...yboard or pen to write message or letter . In fact , If I finish my study at scho...
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...pen to write message or letter . In fact , If I finish my study at school , I rea...
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...n to write message or letter . In fact , If I finish my study at school , I reall...
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...n fact , If I finish my study at school , I really prefer to meet my friend at co...
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Suggestion: Furthermore
... friend at coffee shop to write message.Furthermore , Everyone would have more chance to ...
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Suggestion: ,
...coffee shop to write message.Furthermore , Everyone would have more chance to me...
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...ffee shop to write message.Furthermore , Everyone would have more chance to meet ...
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Suggestion:
...d have more chance to meet each other if people use spoken communication so the r...
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Line 5, column 542, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...cation so the relationship is more close . In conclusion , there may be some r...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...onship is more close . In conclusion , there may be some reasons to support pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78521126761 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92880069402 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524647887324 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.5048819783 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.545454545 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5454545455 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 43.0 5.01903807615 857% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157320192685 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717900408957 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551384682332 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872925665716 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522684321916 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.