Some people believe that children's time outside of school should be filled with scheduled activities such as art and music classes and sports. Others feel that children need free time to play and relax.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many people opine that children should attend some extra tuitions like art, music classes and sports after lessons. Others reckon that schoolchildren require spare time to have relaxation, play with their friends when classes have finished. In my opinion, they should do both of them. This essay will discuss both views and state my own position.
Learning new skills such as drawing and painting, playing some kind of musical instruments and playing sports is important for each child. In this case, art and sport classes are the best option to teach that adroitness. Art classes can aid them to expand their outlook and sport classes can help to be healthy in a physical way. That is why children should attend them when they are free.
In terms of others' thought, after lessons children get tired and they need to relax. They should not attend other extra courses because they can learn nothing when they are exhausted. So they ought to have a rest, play with their friends in their spare time.
On the other hand, schoolchildren can do both of them. As an example, in alternate days they might participate in scheduled activities and other days they can have relaxation. In my opinion, this is better approach than doing only one.
Taking everything into consideration, both views said above are good for children but trying to do all of them is the best.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Many people opine that children should a...
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...oth views and state my own position. Learning new skills such as drawing and ...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a physical way" with adverb for "physical"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nd sport classes can help to be healthy in a physical way. That is why children should attend the...
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...uld attend them when they are free. In terms of others thought, after lesson...
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...h their friends in their spare time. On the other hand, schoolchildren can do...
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...better approach than doing only one. Taking everything into consideration, bo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88841201717 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39852349481 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570815450644 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5495064821 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.9333333333 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5333333333 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317656602264 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104872343553 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474606340002 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169612866199 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891785411508 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Many people opine that children should a...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oth views and state my own position. Learning new skills such as drawing and ...
^^
Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a physical way" with adverb for "physical"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nd sport classes can help to be healthy in a physical way. That is why children should attend the...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uld attend them when they are free. In terms of others thought, after lesson...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h their friends in their spare time. On the other hand, schoolchildren can do...
^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...better approach than doing only one. Taking everything into consideration, bo...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88841201717 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39852349481 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570815450644 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5495064821 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.9333333333 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5333333333 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317656602264 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104872343553 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474606340002 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169612866199 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891785411508 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.