There are variety explanation for why one disobey the law, it could be by the impact of society and poorness or some believes that some individuals are born to commit bad things. In this essay, I will discuss both views and demonstrate my personal opinions.
Most of the motors for crime acts are related to money and to gain money illegally. Money is a huge temptation and it can driven people crazy and gives them the confident to commit crimes. Money will bring their owners status and power and help them to achieve a better lifestyle, which will free them from poorness. A case in point of this a research has pointed out that most of the crimes related to goods are made by poor people. In addition, the broken in society also cause people to do illegal things. For instance, someone who has been bullied for a long time will seek for revenge on their bullies, which can be linked with many shooting in America.
However, some still believes that some people who are born devil and will not change their personality under any circumstances. This idea can be proved true through many cases where the criminal are raised in a wealthy family with good surrounding people, but they still have that psychopath thought in them which lead to them commit tragic crimes. Also, some research have prove that some people are actually psycho when they was born by looking at the brain through X-ray.
In conclusion, I believes that some individuals are evil from their nature, but in most of the cases criminal are affect by outside forces such as purvey and the society.
- Today there is a great increase in antisocial behaviour and lack of respect to others What are the causes of this What measures can be taken to reduce this problem 78
- Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people believe that a crime is a result of social problems and poverty others think that crime is a result of bad person s nature Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck to what extent do you agree or disagree Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subj 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'drive' or 'be driven'?
Suggestion: drive; be driven
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
... from poorness. A case in point of this a research has pointed out that most of the crimes...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'proved', 'proven'.
Suggestion: proved; proven
...tragic crimes. Also, some research have prove that some people are actually psycho wh...
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Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'believe'
Suggestion: believe
...ain through X-ray. In conclusion, I believes that some individuals are evil from the...
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
..., but in most of the cases criminal are affect by outside forces such as purvey and the s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, look, so, still, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70652173913 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31383914886 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1527480322 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.25 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148474182119 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602982254191 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474718866718 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094657188428 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448261538658 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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