In this modern society, the uprising in the number of disrespectful and social rebellion acts is a major concern. In this essay, I will explain the causes and provide suitable solutions for this phenomenon.
The lack of care for children at an early life age is to blame for their misbehaving of them. Children can really easy to expose themself to learn bad things, especially in this cutting-edge era, where most of them are in contact with a cellphone. In addition, people who have suffered from mistreatment before may develop to treat badly toward others people. For instance, someone who has been bullied at school will tend to bully those who at a weaker position to release their anger.
Due to the severity of the problems, a timely solution is required in order to tackle them. Firstly, adults should give more attention to what their children learn and correct their behavior at a young age. Fixing children at a young age is far easier compared to when they are teenagers. Parents should have control over the information there's offspring are consuming and ensure there are no toxic things. Secondly, the government should pay more attention to protecting the safety of its citizens. Those in charge should make people who bullied others or have mistreatment behavior suffer from punishment. Moreover, teaching students about good behaviors and correct manners will help to improve the situation.
In conclusion, the rising in misbehaving and ill- manner actions in today's world can be explained by the lack of caring by adults and bullied in school life, which can be resolved with the help of upbringing and government.
- whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck to what extent do you agree or disagree Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subj 56
- Today there is a great increase in antisocial behaviour and lack of respect to others What are the causes of this What measures can be taken to reduce this problem 78
- Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people believe that a crime is a result of social problems and poverty others think that crime is a result of bad person s nature Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04044117647 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66029930006 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595588235294 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5475862295 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9285714286 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137749054144 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420789228696 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526291507625 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968852265424 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539301940558 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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