Some people believe that educating children altogether will benefit them. Others think intelligent children should be taught separately and given speacial courses. Discuss those views.
There is an opinion about separating intellectual students from normal students and teach them privately.Adverse to that,some individual believe that there should not be any discrimination between dull and smart students
Undoubtedly, both sides have balance in their views and in this essay we would talk about the merits and challenges this educational method can face and the affects of it on intellectuality of pupils
First of all,i would like to share a report public by university of Harvard which states that a circle of intelligent colleagues can influence the other students in positive manner.breifly it can be considered that group of smart minds have ability to make their buddies stand with their level.
On the contrary, there is a clashing opinion of massses who suppose that students with exceptional minds should not be merge with others learners as it could upset their studies.This theory might not be acceptable as there is no evidence suggests that educational environment of brilliant students get affected by studying with their dull colleagues.
To summarize,It can be concluded that the assumption that intelligent students should be lectured apartly is organically a wrong assumption and should be discouraged in schools.While the former opinion is preferable as it would give all students an opportunity to learn from each other irrespective of their educational position.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, while, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47247706422 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19163552564 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56880733945 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 20.2975951904 355% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 179.574187702 49.4020404114 363% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 397.666666667 106.682146367 373% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.6666666667 20.7667163134 350% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.0 7.06120827912 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141570696448 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104409813384 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0231065688939 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804098247337 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332481392354 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.7 13.0946893788 311% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -10.06 50.2224549098 -20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.5 11.3001002004 288% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.63 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.7 8.58950901804 136% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 63.0 9.78957915832 644% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.1190380762 304% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 63.0 10.7795591182 584% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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