The popularity of news media often has been significantly influential in people's lives. Some people believe this to be a negative development. To what extent, do you agree or disagree with their opinion?
In this era of technology and science,individuals believe that media can affect the lifestyles of people notably. Individuals say that people should not be influenced by media because it can have negative impact on immature minds.
Media is considered as an active source of getting informations and news.people feel comfortable by believing on TV news rather than of social media as it can be fake after all.But overrelying on TV news can have harmful effects on psychological health of individuals.it have ability to change the lifestyles of youth.adolescents can get impressed by different kinds of ads broadcast on news channels like fashion ads and luxury diets which simultaneously economical families can not afford
The over hyped news may agitate the students and can be disaster for them.
There are also some positive aspects of news channel which can not be denied.
It gives you information about all the incidents happening on state level or globally.it broadcasts all the incidents instantly and describe everything about everything instantly. The amenity that people can easily access news on your bed at any time is the finest luxury of TV channels.
There are both pros and cons of news channel.sometimes they misleads the masses by covering up fake news but overall media is performing a fine job by immediately reporting all the significant incidents happening all around the world
Finally, considering the services of news media it can be concluded that overdependence on news channels sometimes harmful but on the whole if individuals measure certain factors media could be a beneficial source of information
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: But
...ocial media as it can be fake after all.But overrelying on TV news can have harmful...
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Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
... psychological health of individuals.it have ability to change the lifestyles of you...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'mislead'
Suggestion: mislead
...and cons of news channel.sometimes they misleads the masses by covering up fake news but...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, so, after all, in fact, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32307692308 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21728872586 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584615384615 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 183.583712763 49.4020404114 372% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 197.714285714 106.682146367 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.1428571429 20.7667163134 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203368654723 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109954193745 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451820640935 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106365737118 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446750572075 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.2 13.0946893788 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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