Some people believe that educational success depends on good
teachers, while others believe that students’ attitudes are important.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Achieving in career has become a challenging task for every students in this competitive generation.A group of people argue that,children succeeding in curriculum depends wholesome on their mentors.While,others believe that,it is based on the frame of mind of a child to study.In this essay, I will discuss either views and state my opinion.
Firstly,it is believed that,a teacher must be a complete package of every skills in teaching and guiding the students.A perfect mentor who owns the maneuver of explaining subjects in a precise and easy manner,also motivates young children to learn and achieve their goal in life.For example,the recent research conducted by Mary's university on"factors that improve children IQ level" revealed that,schools and teachers are playing the major role in a child's victory.Henceforth,every individual have a lecturer or a father who stays as a teacher helping them to attain their goal in education.
On the contrary,some people believe that,the willingness of a student is important to excel in their curriculum.For instance,a child with a negative attitude towards subjects have a higher chance to setback in their curriculum,despite of the teachers effort.Furthermore,positive behaviours and patience in learing can be acquired through continous training and their involement.
To conclude,in my opinion,the success of a child in their academic depends on their mentors and lecturers who can motivate and discipline them to win in life at great heights.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73008849558 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.83523936764 2.80592935109 137% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646017699115 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.2975951904 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 152.225162178 49.4020404114 308% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 323.75 106.682146367 303% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.5 20.7667163134 272% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.5 7.06120827912 404% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147522594595 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937484372754 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047327357613 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937484372754 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047327357613 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.8 13.0946893788 258% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.28 50.2224549098 -5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 11.3001002004 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.84 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.0 8.58950901804 140% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.1190380762 241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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