Some people believe that educational success depends on good teachers,while others believe that students attitudes are important .Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Few persons accept that academic prosperity rely on good tutors,but some says that attitudes of students are vital.I believe that best teachers plays an important role for educational success.In this essay first I am going to discuss about crucial role of a tutor in academic achievement of the student and then the impact of the students attitude on their further/higher education.
First of all,when it comes to students success,teachers are the essential guide for the pupils in each and every step of their victory.They supplement the best ideas in their academics by discriminating between sources while doing a project works and group works.I agree with this because post graduates in universities gets the best feed back from the professors by their continuous assessment which is helpful for a student to overcome his/her drawbacks.For example,a recent publication in the Hindu newspaper is,university students in Andhra Pradesh scored low in academics because of the staff crisis.
On the other hand,current generation students in graduation and post graduation levels are dependent on autonomous learning.Maximum number of graduates are self-studying and doing group works to assimilate knowledge.Moreover,they are lacking proper view on the curriculum and syllabus because they are overconfident on themselves.I disagree with this for the reason of students lacks an integral part of the syllabus if they will not study under supervision.For instance,a recent research on university students in Visakhapatanam shows that students who followed teacher-led lessons scored better than the autonomous learners.
Overall,educational success depends on the good tutors who helps students to assimilate knowledge from various sources.So,academic prosperity depends on the teachers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, then, while, for example, for instance, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87404580153 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.5646014729 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599236641221 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.2975951904 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 187.196921716 49.4020404114 379% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 384.75 106.682146367 361% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.5 20.7667163134 315% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.25 7.06120827912 358% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207168375049 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141074869292 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791973666512 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141074869292 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791973666512 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.0 13.0946893788 298% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -11.42 50.2224549098 -23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 11.3001002004 274% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.65 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.04 8.58950901804 140% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.1190380762 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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