Some people believe that educational success depends on good teachers, while others believe that students attitudes are important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Few persons think that academic prosperity relies on good tutors, but some say that attitudes of students are vital. I believe that best teachers play an important role in educational success. In this essay first I am going to discuss the crucial role of a tutor in the academic achievement of the student and then the impact of the students' attitude on their further/higher education.
First of all, when it comes to students success, teachers are an essential guide for the pupils in every step of their victory. They supplement the best ideas in their academics by discriminating between sources while doing project works and group works. I agree with this because postgraduates in universities get the best feedback from the professors by their continuous assessment which is helpful for a student to overcome his/her drawbacks. For example, a recent publication in the Hindu newspaper is, university students in Andhra Pradesh scored low in academics because of the staff crisis.
On the other hand, current generation students in graduation and post-graduation levels are dependent on autonomous learning. The maximum number of graduates are self-studying and doing group works to assimilate knowledge. Moreover, they are lacking the proper view of the curriculum and syllabus because they are overconfident on themselves. I disagree with this for the reason of students lacks an integral part of the syllabus if they will not study under supervision. For instance, recent research on university students in Visakhapatanam shows that students who followed teacher-led lessons scored better than the autonomous learners.
Overall, educational success depends on the good tutors who help students to assimilate knowledge from various sources. So, academic prosperity depends on the teachers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 334, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
... the student and then the impact of the students attitude on their further/higher educat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, then, while, for example, for instance, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51438848921 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03978118535 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579136690647 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2948416625 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211364759231 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733150626305 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545287301994 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141009271972 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714964790391 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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