Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, tuition waiver is a problem attracting many people’s interests all over the world. It is argued that it may be better if the governments abolish university tuition and make it free for all students from a variety of backgrounds. While I agree with the assertion that people from different status need to have a chance to access tertiary education, I believe that fee remover may have bad effects on both governments and society.
On the one hand, pursuing higher education should be considered as one of the basic rights for all students. Firstly, after finishing the third-level education, students would be equipped with a host of essential skills which are required for entering a fierce competitive workforce. Abolishing tuition fees, therefore, broadens their opportunities to enroll in well-training and better-prepared education that they have ever learnt in secondary and high school before. Secondly, attending the college education with free-charge-of tuition is a good way for the underprivileged to surpass their tough life without burden. When students raised in poor families and their parents are unaffordable for the tuition fee, are given financial support from the government, that would be a marvelous motivation in order to devote themselves for the job market.
On the other hand, tuition waiver also has adverse bearing on everyone in the society. In terms of tax systems, there would be a severe burden for the government as they do no have enough money to cover the cost of facilities, manufactures or even payment for teachers if tuition fee remover policy continues to be implemented. Finland - one of the highest tax-paying countries in the world, for example, is under a bad pressure to deal with the loss of the public's money since it operated non-fee policies for university students. Moreover, as all students are unchallenging when pursuing tertiary education would cause enormous problems in the workforce. The employee will have the same level of education leading to a competitive and disorder world, in other words, have a bad effect on the foreseeable future.
In conclusion, governments can carry out some replaced policies such as scholarships so as to ease the burden for college students as well as insure every person from different background has a better chance to approach university education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1994.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28912466844 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99625570019 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549071618037 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.604764419 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.428571429 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9285714286 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0714285714 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289846844872 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954025997199 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473863862142 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173737279126 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486544618068 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.