Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
After graduating from high school, students face a tough question of whether they should enroll in the job market right away or continue their education at university. While there are some benefits to choosing a particular job the teenager is interested in, I would agree that it is much better to go to college or university.
On the one hand, there are many compelling reasons why the student should get a job straight after finishing school. Firstly, the teenager will have a chance to gain real experience and learn practical skills when pursuing a career. Some skills such as communication, logical thinking and problems solving independently are strengthened by regularly dealing with tricky tasks at the workplace. Secondly, it is a good way to broaden their career path, provide more job opportunities and therefore get higher salaries in the future. Students who are able to make money early can fulfill their basic needs and have financial independence without support from their parents.
On the other hand, I totally believe that it is a wise choice if teenagers can hold a bachelor’s degree after completing tertiary education. Because it is true that though some were born to the ability of many fields such as art, history or philosophy, others like medicine, doctor and teacher require well-qualification which is only educated in college. Moreover, the job market is more and more competitive and difficult to enroll in. Students who are well-educated with full knowledge, hence, can have the ability to deal with struggle and even get a higher salary compared to those who jump straight in society to find a job.
In conclusion, the decision of choosing a path to follow completely depends on each student. While skipping the college circumstume to find a job after finishing high school is beneficial, I personally support the idea that it is not the best route to a successful career in the long-term.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 632, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...jump straight in society to find a job. In conclusion, the decision of choosing ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08490566038 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90762852291 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591194968553 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4110437768 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.384615385 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238590151235 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767380931461 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650180027403 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143751416415 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030591784999 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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