Some people think that the news media has become much more influential in people’s lives today and it is a negative development.
Some people believe that nowadays media networks concentrate profoundly on negative development rather than contributing something positive to society through news outlets. I partly agree with this assertion; while it may be true in the case of depressing and upsetting news which are over-broadcasted, others seem to have a beneficial effect in our life.
On the one hand, the trend that reports of negative problems, in particular, may have adverse effects on individuals and society. Firstly, in terms of each person, news which are exaggerated in pursuit of attracting people’s attention and run with sole aim of maximizing profit can cause feelings of panic or develop pessimistic attitudes towards daily life. Life is considerably stressful as it is, however, media makes it more serious by adding redundant news about the secret of celebrities’ personal life, natural disasters or traffic accidents which leads people to absorb too much bad information. Secondly, with the growth of gloomy reports and sensational contents of news outlets would result in the influx of people who imitate negative behavior broadcasted regularly. For example, the rate of suicide in Vietnam is rising abnormal after communication posted pemanent news about the successive cases of student who kill themselves.
On the other hand, I truly agree that news media also reports useful information for people from all walks of life. The function of presenting the potential of severe disasters such as tsunami, flood or earthquake perfectly exemplifies this situation. For instance, news outlets would give speedy warning for residents in order to take appropriate action to deal with problems and stay safely right away. Governments and local authorities are also able to figure out feasible and timely solutions for the serious problems, therefore minimizing detrimental consequences.
In conclusion, although it might seem sensible that more and more unbeneficial news are produced everyday, I personally support the idea that media continue play an important role in our daily life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...and more unbeneficial news are produced everyday, I personally support the idea that med...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53605015674 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96147172148 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64263322884 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.2479492351 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.166666667 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5833333333 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256010900621 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874963864052 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770107059115 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148912974779 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552649881171 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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