Some people believe famous people’s support towards international aid organizations draws attention to problems. Others think celebrities make the problem less important. Disscuss both view and give your opinion.
it is believed that university education is everyone’s basic right and tuition exemption should be made by the government regardless of students’ socio-economic backgrounds. Although there has been a constant debate related to this practice, I am certain that waiving tuition would have a beneficial bearing on both the students and the government.
one of the chief influences of the free-college policy is that it will give a rise to students’ advantages in studying. universities, or colleges, are considered to be a smaller version of our society, therefore, it is unavoidable that the difference between the privileged person and the underprivileged one is prominently huge, especially owing to the unnecessary high tuition fee. regardless of social class, every student has equal intelligence and they should receive the same opportunities to gain admittance into college or university. If the entire country’s students are fully paid for the university course, discrimination will simultaneously decrease. Moreover, cutting off exorbitant prices for studying allows the gross enrollment rate to increase, subsequently, numerous gifted students, or hidden geniuses, who are held back by financial obstacles, will get access to qualified education programs in multiple universities.
Another point worth noting is that investment in education is an appropriate choice as it could bring back unexpected benefits for the government. In terms of career, individuals having bachelor’s degrees would definitely stand the chance of landing higher-paid jobs. Hence, a high-quality workforce is a prime contributor to the development of the economy, which means this investment has resulted in both the education and financial aspect of one nation. To elucidate, Germany is an industrialized country in Europe, famous for paying the highest average gross annual salary for workers via several abolish tuition fees for undergraduates.
In conclusion, I still assert that students have a right to attend university, as well as the government should take into consideration the abolition of university tuition to create a high-standard society concerning economy and education.
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- Some people believe famous people s support towards international aid organizations draws attention to problems Others think celebrities make the problem less important Disscuss both view and give your opinion 11
- Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have To what extent do you agree or disagree 95
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85758513932 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38599495031 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625386996904 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.066065597 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.666666667 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9166666667 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0241639049836 0.244688304435 10% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0093173604495 0.084324248473 11% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0112157062761 0.0667982634062 17% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0147709443661 0.151304729494 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0114996942879 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.0 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.4 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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