Some
people believe that a gap year between school and university is a good idea,
while others disagree strongly. Consider both sides of this debate and present
your own opinion.
Although some argue that a gap year between school and university is a great idea for students, others assume that the reverse is true. This essay will explore both aspects and explain in detail both sides before reaching a final remark in the conclusion.
On the one hand, proponents of gap years argue that many potential benefits could help students a lot. They will have time in order to consider carefully before making any important decisions if they have not had any plan for their career path. For example, making detailed plans and clear goals might help them better address problems and challenges when in a new environment. Having a clear plan allows students to gain excellent performance at the university more easily and faster.
Nevertheless, opponents of gap years assume that students might easily commit social evils. Because of freedom in gap time, students have many opportunities to build harmful habits that greatly affect their lives. One of the popular habits frequently built during the gap time is staying too late for playing games;, therefore, they can be addicted to gaming and other smart devices. Moreover, students who do not have steady jobs are also economic burdens for their families. Financial dependence on their parents might be a negative thing when it is a good chance to build their independence.
In conclusion, a gap year might be a good time for students to prepare carefully for their career path but it could also be a bad time for negative influences like building bad habits as well as being a burden for the family. I think that the education policy should be adjusted to many short intervals during a year instead of a gap time that lasts a year as students both have time to prepare and do not commit harmful habits or be a burden.
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- Some people believe that a gap year between school and university is a good idea while others disagree strongly Consider both sides of this debate and present your own opinion 73
- Some people believe that a gap year between school and university is a good idea while others disagree strongly Consider both sides of this debate and present your own opinion 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86928104575 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52252232614 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542483660131 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5525617094 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.615384615 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144538421443 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608555780777 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672376388697 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116766739204 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968473893132 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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