Some people think that a gap year between school and university is a good idea while others disagree strongly. Consider both sides of this debate and present your own opinion.
Education has been controversial topic of debate in recent years. Some people think that a gap year between school and university is a good idea, whereas another group of people thinks students have to finish their schooling. I strongly agree that those should complete course at university continously in their vital steps and I will explain both sides and my view below.
On the one hand, students continue schooling at university have more benefits. Firstly, it is easier for students to pass national entrance university examinatons after finishing schooling at high school because they still maintain a range of knowledge in their mind which gap students could have some troubles after a year off. In addition to this , it only takes them 4 years for university and 3 years for college to graduate from. It means that they can go to work a year sooner than the gap year ones. Moreover, they are aware of focusing on quality of school so as to get excellent bachalor degrees which offer them confidence in work and opportunities to get higher positions in company. For instance, a survey conducted through The Times of India shows that 60% of students having no gap year between school and university has confidence of taking part in social activities and good results of study.
On the other hand, some people state parents should allow their children to have a year off before going on studying at university or college because they have to suffer pressure from high school study and they need to have time to relax and to learn the way to live independently which is essental for them during the time at university.. Futhermore, in order not to put burget on parents, some students are ready to get a good preparation of income for their school fees and daily expenses at univesity. Students having a job not only get incomes but have a chance to contact and work with experiened co- workers that is useful from their job in the future.
In conclusion, in my opinion, students should continue their study at university or college after graduating from high school which is outweighing the other part of the topic. Studying continuously offers students more opportunities to reach achievements in life
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s after a year off. In addition to this , it only takes them 4 years for universi...
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... aware of focusing on quality of school so as to get excellent bachalor degrees which of...
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Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...l for them during the time at university.. Futhermore, in order not to put burget...
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Line 4, column 262, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ortunities to reach achievements in life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, still, whereas, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89866666667 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66582112156 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.6766584476 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.214285714 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7857142857 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248270155625 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958209685347 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839802452164 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169990422847 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100886911084 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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