Some people believe that the good leaders ar eborn, whereas others hold the opinion that the leadership qualities could be obtained during the life. Who represents the good leader qualities indeed?
Leadership has been the most demanding skill all of the time. In addition, this type of skill changes the life style of human being. Many people argue that leadering talent is given by the nature, however the others believe that everyone could have leadership skill during the life. What is the actual reason to represent good leader skill? In this essay, I will discuss both of opinions and give examples.
The majority of cases, people show their talent since childhood period. Many of them could sing as a bird or have mathematical ability that solve tasks rapidly. Children might not good in a certain sphere, however it does prevent performing confident decisions that makes other people follow them and they might have never been taught that how to be a leader. In average statistics shows that most leaders are gifted by nature. In addition, most of them have achieved their best results.
In contrast, psychologists and researchers already found out that anyone can obtain a great deal of skills such as singing, leadership and etc. For instance, many leaders share their successful experiences to audiences, therefore it makes more convenient to be a leader as well. Although some people consider that obtaining leadership skill is as easy as falling off a log. Furthermore, many of them might have a fault, thereby there are a likelihood of giving up learning the skills.
To sum up, everybody could improve leadership skill, so it does not matter are you talented or not. Also many coaches and trainers help for obtaining ones’ skills. In my view, for getting any kind of abilities depends on you.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...hem have achieved their best results. In contrast, psychologists and researchers...
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...more convenient to be a leader as well. Although some people consider that obtaining lea...
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Suggestion: Also,
...oes not matter are you talented or not. Also many coaches and trainers help for obta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in contrast, kind of, such as, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9852398524 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54564945548 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619926199262 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3185024725 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4705882353 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246492388119 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725205619308 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072757356734 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141212379044 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069141328998 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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