Some people believe that good medical knowledge is important for nurses. But some people say that other skills are more important. Discuss both and give your opinion.
People have different views about whether nurses need more knowledge on medical sphere than other ability. In my view, modern medical centers and hospitals require both knowledge and skill.
There are three main reasons why it could be better having more medical knowledge. Firstly, all the medical people must know curative ability, that they might be need it their work time. It related to someone’s life not money or other thing, so they could not risk. Secondly, having enough knowledge gives to nurses more confidence while giving some remedies and injection. Furthermore, diseases are becoming more difficult to understand and treat. This means all doctors and nurses would understand medical phrases, they must know special knowledge.
However, I would agree also with, those who believe that other skills are important to nurses. Giving medicines and puncture are nurse duty, and when they are hiring for job employee test them for these skills. So these skills are their duty and profession is also requires these. Moreover, there are a lot of extra ordinary situations with individuals in the hospitals. Nurses and other staff members must have experience and practice such situations, but they do it with permission. Another factor is that, today there are much private hospitals in the world, and they pay for nurses depend on their ability and practice, so it would be good for their financial support.
In conclusion, while there are enough reasons to believe both opinions, my own view is that nurses are need for both, medical knowledge and nursing skills.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07058823529 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27161411347 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 255.0 20.2975951904 1256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1293.0 106.682146367 1212% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 255.0 20.7667163134 1228% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 117.0 7.06120827912 1657% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363415210061 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.363415210061 0.084324248473 431% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224974424822 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366979401943 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 129.9 13.0946893788 992% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -187.35 50.2224549098 -373% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 102.7 11.3001002004 909% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.61 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.38 8.58950901804 226% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 9.78957915832 541% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 104.0 10.1190380762 1028% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 53.0 10.7795591182 492% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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