Some people believe that government should spend money on new building rather than renovating existing building. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the contemporary society one of the controversial issues relates to wether government's funds should be investigated in creating new infastructures or in reorganazing and making better the existing ones.This essay will, firstly, discuss the opinion of renovating present buildings and,secondly, it will examine the view of people that consider new houses should be built.
To begin with, quite a lot of existing churches, medical centres, schools refer to the history of a country where they are situated. So, in order to depict the memory of the older times, it would be more sensible not to destroy this infastructure but try to renovate it. For instance, in the central part of Moscow can be found buildings that date to 1970 years and work as a museum complexes.
On the other side, it is much more proffitable to create modern offices, factories and other types of buildings.Replacing old-fashioned infrastructure by the up-to-date one attracts various kinds of buyers which are willing to spend their money in such projects. The illustrations of these actions are almost in every district of nowadays Saint Petesburg. As a result, government's funds are fullfilled with new portion of investigations.This fact can be approved by the statictics according to which in last 5 years it was earned 10 % more from new buildings than in the previous decades.
To conclude, creating absolutely new buildings can help the government but, in my opinion, saving the history of countries and cities is much more significant for all people from all over the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19367588933 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19939001564 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632411067194 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.335201952 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.25 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.625 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.75 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18159911913 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642154950815 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540352373712 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105240141513 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429562277894 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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