The line graph shows estimated sales of gold in Dubai for 12 months in 2002 in millions of Dirhams.

Essay topics:

The line graph shows estimated sales of gold in Dubai for 12 months in 2002 in millions of Dirhams.

The given illustration contrasts Dubai gold sales during 2002 year. Overall, the trend is downward.

According to the presented line graph, it can be clearly seen that at the beginning of the year, from January to March, sales were gradually increasing and reached the highest point of 2002 that equals to 350 millions of Dirhams.

On the contrary, after the March sales began decreasing and felt to the point of 110 millions in July. In August was observed a noticeable jump, however, the last months the trend remained unchanged at the level around 200 millions of Dirhams.

In conclusion, the sales of gold in Dubai during 2002 were fluctuating and in the end of the year came approximately to the same point from which started.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '350 million'.
Suggestion: 350 million
...he highest point of 2002 that equals to 350 millions of Dirhams. On the contrary, after th...
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Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that equals to 350 millions of Dirhams. On the contrary, after the March sales b...
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Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '200 million'.
Suggestion: 200 million
... remained unchanged at the level around 200 millions of Dirhams. In conclusion, the sales o...
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Line 7, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...usion, the sales of gold in Dubai during 2002 were fluctuating and in the end of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, in conclusion, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 616.0 965.302439024 64% => OK
No of words: 125.0 196.424390244 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.928 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.34370152488 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59148142961 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 172.8 283.868780488 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9756898274 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309604380281 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132182030338 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754888373878 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174415589694 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221601832886 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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