Opinions are divided on whether a larger amount of money should be spent on arts such as paintings or statues in urban areas to create a better space for citizens or not. Although doing so offers certain benefits, I believe that the financial support from the public should be allocated to other urgent purposes.
On the one hand, there are several advantages of putting more works of art in public places. One of them is that paintings make space more beautiful so people are likely to go there to relax. These days, many young people tend to go to places which display arts to take photos. Another is that statues of famous people in the history should be put in public spaces like parks. It is a good way to educate children about history. For example, in many parks in Vietnam, the statues of those who have merit in liberating the country are put to appreciate their sacrifice.
On the other hand, the government budget is a limited resource, so it shouls be prioritized for other purposes such as education or healthcare system. In my country Vietnam, especially in rural areas, there are still many children with lack of education, so financial packing should be spent on supporting poor students by scholar packages instead of focusing too much on art. In addition, there are more and more dangerous diseases, as a result many hospitals have suffer from overload patients, so it is necessary to take action to tackle this problem. Therefore, the government should dedicate more money to the nation’s healthcare system by improving the facilities in hospitals.
In conclusion, although some people contend that putting more paintings and statues brings benefits in terms of art and history, I am in favor of the opinion that education and healthcare system should be prioritized.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 466, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'suffered'.
Suggestion: suffered
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, therefore, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92079207921 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61918566316 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53795379538 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7942512307 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.692307692 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310788232788 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110867054534 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727602887387 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190058951857 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561868226506 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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