Some people think that children under 18 years old should receive full-time education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Opinions are divided on whether underage individuals should get access to full-time education or not. Although there are certain reasons why the government should not apply compulsory full-term education, I believe that the benefits of doing so are far more significant.
On the one hand, in some developing countries, basic education still requires fees, so it is difficult for those who cannot afford the tuition fee. These days, there are many kinds of fees in school such as books or uniforms, they put parents under pressure, as a result, many students, who come from poor families, have to drop their studies. For example, in my country Vietnam, especially in rural areas, some schoolchildren have to leave their studies behind and attend to their family’s work such as argicultural work and household to decrease pressure on their parents.
On the other hand, full-time education for those who are under 18 years old offers many benefits in terms of individuals and society. With regard to the former, compulsory education brings young people more job opportunities and useful knowledge. In addition, the school not only provides them with knowledge about maths or science but also teaches them moral lessons, which is beneficial for the society in the future such as a decrease in the crime rate. Moreover, a wealthy and healthy nation can only be formed when teenagers of the country are educated well.
In conclusion, in the reality, there are still many children without access to full-time education, and this requires the government to take timely action to tackle this issues. I totally agree with the statement that all teenagers under 18 years old have the right to get full-time education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...have to drop their studies. For example, in my country Vietnam, especially in rur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14336917563 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67761847129 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594982078853 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.2326017172 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.454545455 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5454545455 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248542271413 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947841353615 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824179464371 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149452264676 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659778153665 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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