Some people believe that government spends too much money on developing space exploration techonology.there are many other financial needs that the government should address instad.to what extent do you agree or disagree.
Undoubtedly,spending money on space technology instead of other sectors to funded by the government that some think.Although this essay moderately agree because invest too much funds on this invention research is not well because education and health sectors would most crucial needs for common people.
Funding on space technology can fruitful at some level for government because of this invention we can know about what happen surrounding the world.In other words, with help of this tech people can easily survive on the earth which has tends to open boarding view about internet ans its application . GSLV satellite to cite an example,this machinery lunch by India on the space ,with help of this satellite Indian citizen can easily access the internet which can not only helpful for educational but also for health purposes.Consequently, lunching satellite on space has improve lifestyle of particular country people at some level.
Despite of this,government might more funds for mandatory things namely educational and health sectors .This two fields are much higher need for public because these has prime services that can provided by government,because this both has primary necessities of individuals.For an example,Indian parliament invest more than quarter on this both fields rather than space research.Thus,investing money on this leading sectors which can more helpful for particular nations people.
On the concluding remark,while,in my opinion, invest money on space exploration can useful at some level but government cannot neglected others sectors such as educational and public health sectors which can more important for common people.If government can focus more on this area, then it would create imbalance in other fields of country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, then, thus, well, while, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61048689139 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31671504439 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554307116105 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.1313843799 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 299.6 106.682146367 281% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.4 20.7667163134 257% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.2 7.06120827912 272% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150100744992 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104683897931 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492516462697 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116006398439 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047188525341 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.7 13.0946893788 242% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.22 50.2224549098 18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 11.3001002004 222% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.15 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.