some people believe that government spends too much money on developing space exploration technology. There are many others financial needs that the government should address instead.To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Considering the term developing space technology, since last ten decades government has had invest more fund on this field compared to others development .Although this essay moderately agree with later view because other sectors more likely to needs valuable funds such as public transport and public health facilities, this both are connecting with common people than space research connect only space researchers and government.
Spending money to improve public transport that the positive approached by the government. That Means this has a leading sectors to deal with public opinions also help to fight against the air contamination which can not only helpful for country citizens directly or in directly but also for government. India to cite an example, this country government can be allocated approximately 50% funds from that budgets compared to space technology because they know investing on this field how much useful for their citizens. Consequently, that will create positive impact on public needs because majority of people rely on this sectors and it also helpful to reduce the air pollution.
Moreover, second most crucial development that needs for funds that are improving public health. Invest more into this field which has beneficial to combat against the hazardous epidemic. For instance, Indian government have been invested roughly 50% of their budgets on improve public health amenities. Thus, citizens of this country not only survive better against the dangerous epidemic but also after this improvement that standers of living increase rapidly.
Despite of this, allocating too much money on developing space technology by the government cannot beneficial for all the people. In other words, government and space research scientists only can know about this development compared to other individuals. Thus, invest more funds on this field not fruitful idea because of above reasons.
On concluding remark, Although the acknowledgement about this view in my opinion spending too much money on improve space exploration technology has not better thing yet, developing public transport and public healthcare more crucial aspects of the government. If this trend will be continued, then it would might create imbalance on others development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, second, so, then, thus, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58501440922 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73011219754 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507204610951 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.926212646 49.4020404114 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.428571429 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7857142857 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170452242994 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709020620378 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066374233212 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120493815158 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558493493248 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.