In today's advanced science and technology people still values artists like painter ,writer,musician.How can art make a difference in our society that science cannot .
Indeed, the ubiquity of a science is irrefutable by humans due to its precious contribution to the world but people such as artists, who are exceptionally talented have a greater influence on society too. As they teach citizens how to appreciate a life and live it with its full potential science cannot do that.
On the one hand ,expressing human essence ,value and emotion can be revealed by an artist's in many ways first and foremost one is authors who motivate and inspire people through stories Actually they have a power to create reality out of fiction, thereby they may induce feeling of joy and excitement in reader's mind .Secondly ,musician brings harmony and joy thorough music which can soothe mind and soul of a listener Variety of beats and lyrics impact on perceiver's mood .If someone hears happy songs the feelings of sadness can be suppressed and replaced with the cheering ones Lastly ,painters who portrays images by doing so ,they try to convey messages and express creativity. Viewing paintings, one can understand the mentality, feelings and emotions of a painter. For an instance, The world's famous master piece: "Mona Lisa” had had been admired since centuries and will continue to inspire millions for years to come. As art evokes feelings and emotion in people, which make people truly alive therefore, society appreciate artist's undeniable contribution.
Moreover, the omnipresence science has limitations too. As it merely works on laws and principles. Although it has boundless capacity to create artificial intelligence, it fails to generate feelings and emotions. Similarly ,science cannot explain appreciation of life with logical principles that is why lack of social and emotional attachment may occur. In contrary ,the chirping of birds and sound of sea waves only can be admired by a vulnerable person, this attitude only be enhanced by an art.To exemplify ,lullaby which is the type of music connects mother and child by developing unconditional love for each other. Hence, art has superior pole when it comes to the matter of the heart. As a result, science's limit only can be overcome by an art.
To conclude, in spite of enormous achievement of science, art is still special to people as it brings people together as well as enlighten them. This helps for harmony and unity in society, making world better place to live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, hence, if, lastly, may, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, still, therefore, well, such as, as a result, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1994.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11282051282 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75121872463 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610256410256 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 152.476650307 49.4020404114 309% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.933333333 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5333333333 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241579151196 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754690022698 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484306156565 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132881968523 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015608381596 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.