In recent times, international sport events have gained a lot of attention becuase it can be seen a way of bringing people from all over the world together as a community. And even more than that hosting such an event might be considered as honour. But it can be seen that people have mixed opion about the situation and this essay will be discussing it.
People thinking that it is good that their country is hosting an international sports event might be because off the following reasons. Firstly, it can be seen as a way to develop fame for their country worldwide. On top of that, people might feel a sense of patriotism for their nation. Secondly, people may consider this as a friendly gesture from their country.
On the other hand some people may not take this hosting activity positively and some of the reasons can be as follows. People may this this will be too expensive for their country to hosting. Moreover, people with poor sportmanship skills will definitely be against with such an act.
In my opinion, it will depend situation of the country that will be hosting the event. If the country is an underdeveloped country, or if it is not into actively participating in sports then it will not be a good idea to host the event. But if a country is active in sports stream or have some legendary sportsperson, then it will be a good decision for such a country to host such an event.
In conclusion, it depends on country and the people from that country that leads to such opinions. There must be an overall change in the attitude of people and the way they think. Only after that we can have a balance in views of the people.
- The diagrams below show the design for a wave energy machine and its location 73
- The diagrams below show the design for a wave energy machine and its location 67
- The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012 64
- Some people believe that hosting international sports events is good for the country while some people think it is bad Discuss both these views and state your opinion 56
- The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ke this hosting activity positively and some of the reasons can be as follows. People may t...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: this
...e reasons can be as follows. People may this this will be too expensive for their country...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52684563758 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56623663558 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453020134228 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8404642743 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3125 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308871411354 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121906292628 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668068963611 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190322192714 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362871673667 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.