Different types of sports have played an essential role in the human amusing activity, therefore, more and more international sports events are introduced and established in many countries. A group of people believe it is a great opportunity for a nation to host this kind of event, meanwhile, others are afraid of the negative effects. In my opinion, being a host of an international sports tournament could consist of both advantages and disadvantages, however, the drawbacks seem to be eclipsed by the benefits.
On the negative side, international events mean a remarkable entrance of tourists from every corner of the world, including terrorists and criminals. Accordingly, people who commit crimes or robbery could accompany a massive number of tourists come to view the event and then threaten the national security networks of the host. In addition, in order to comfort the tourists, different kinds of luxury facilities will be built which cost a great amount of money and might be abandoned after the end of events because the expensive services of these facilities cannot suit the domestic residence.
On the other hand, owning an international sports program brings lots of massive benefits. Firstly, the national economy of the host country can immediately be thrust by a giant amount of the events’ spectators. These tourists may not come to a country only for a sports event, but they also want to visit the national landscapes and spectacular scenery. In this way, the host’s domestic economy can benefit from tourism and currency exchange. Secondly, it is a great chance for the host citizens to encounter different cultures and traditions. For example, back in 2004, Vietnam managed a regional football match that involves all Asian countries. At the same time, Vietnamese people were exposed to another multicultural interaction between these nations, which was a big honour!
In conclusion, hosting a worldwide sports event may present a security risk, however, I appreciate the advantage that this kind of event brings to the host nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Line 4, column 36, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2696969697 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92384044968 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572727272727 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.2641823392 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.769230769 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3846153846 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3076923077 7.06120827912 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237368740697 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828629585631 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427081679354 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147835357607 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03886475156 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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