Some people believe that individuals are responsible for their own personal happiness. Others argue that happiness can be affected by other factors.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is no doubt that the majority of people would like to be as much happy as possible in their lives. While the personal natural happiness makes it difficult to describe, many debate that there do have other external factors which give people the opportunities to experience or achieve happiness. Both of these views will be discussed in this essay.
On the one hand, people are responsible for their own happiness since nobody can make happiness for them. Humans ought to make more efforts to obtain all goals for themselves which is an absolutely severe rule of life. What is more is that each individual only lives once in this world. Therefore, instead of wasting their time fooling around or being lazy, they should live with their full passion along with taking joy and pleasure from life.
On the other hand, some citizens argue that the happiness of people relates to their money and job. If someone has enough money in his pocket, he will have the chance to enjoy a luxurious life with family and obviously happiness as well. Moving to another point, humans spend one part of their day dealing with their work. That is the reason why every worker should do their own, favourite job. It is not only less stressful and tiring but you also can take joy and satisfaction while working.
To sum up, happiness is difficult to define because it is particularly different to each individual, but I wholeheartedly believe that our basic needs for shelter, food and job need to be fulfilled before we can experience it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun debate seems to be countable; consider using: 'many debates'.
Suggestion: many debates
...ppiness makes it difficult to describe, many debate that there do have other external facto...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, while, no doubt, to sum up, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78409090909 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44871349349 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632575757576 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.631813193 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1538461538 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389472854264 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122273251367 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099324440871 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209548082763 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071000001868 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.