Some people believe that it is beast to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.
Every person response of own discussion. According to some accepting bad circumstance and stay in it is better than change and improve it, while some else believe accept such situations keep people week and they should try to extremely extend them. In my opinion, it is different among of people whether accept unsatisfactory moods or reject them and would like to get progress.
On the one hand, people who would like to stay in a bad condition are very unable. Not only do have shortage of money to meet their needs and other costs but also, they don’t have any satisfy from their jobs. Since that a person involve with his/her job more that 80 percent of his/her life should has a very good satisfaction from it. people can get depressed or illness if don’t enjoy working. They would be accepted that condition because don’t want to change it or don’t have enough power to get better the situation. Hence, prefer to stay in such status in rest of their life.
On the other hand, there are lots of people who want to get progress and change their lives to extend a better life. Although they don’t ensure about the outcome of their work people choose to take risk and try every condition to improve the situation. Infect, they are so motivated and hardworking because of their goals. It is a very good feature that make a person get progress in any condition since they don’t like to be a useless and week person.
In conclusion, there are two types of people who want stay in their situation even is bad and second group related to powerful people. These people can remake everything. I think a person should not accept anything easily to have to fight for it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
... change and improve it, while some else believe accept such situations keep people week...
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Line 2, column 299, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... that 80 percent of his/her life should has a very good satisfaction from it. peopl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, second, so, while, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63422818792 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34779691489 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506711409396 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0255163939 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3125 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213408999613 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682229254438 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673276745962 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146655383841 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090659733418 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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