An unfortunate situation will happen sometime. While some people choose to live with it peacefully, others think that it is better to get up and deal with individual issues. In my point of view, unwanted will never be solved if we just sit there, improvement should be encouraged with this sort of situation.
To begin with, not every bad problem could be solved. Accepting them and learning from flaws sometimes is the only and the best way to deal with them. For instance, choosing a job is not only base on your favor, but it also requires demand for living, particularly, the ability to support yourself as well as your family. In addition to this, many people have chosen the job which they do not wish for. In some special cases such as an economic crisis, having enough money as expecting is impossible and you have to get on with it.
On the other hand, I believe that most of the issues can be solved with determining and unstoppable effort. For example, if you want to get wealth, you will have to learn more and never stop in any situation. If you want to be famous, you will have to show the world your talent, as well as regular, practice to increase. If you get a failure, do not let it stop you, instead, get up and learn from mistakes. As can be witnessed, J.K.Rowling, the author of the famous Harry Potter series was rejected by almost every publishing company in all UK but she did not stop, instead, she kept sending the story and was accepted. That how the world knows about one of the most spectacular adventures of the century.
In conclusion, it is indubitably that unsolvable issues will occur, and learning to accept them is the encouraged solution. Otherwise, I would argue that keep on trying and dealing with a bad situation is the better way to improve people's ability as well as human life.
- The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advanced technology which can prevent and solve a crime Do you agree or disagree 84
- Immigration has a major impact on the society What are the main reasons for immigration To what consequences can it lead 61
- Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online Is this a positive or negative development 56
- Restoration of old buildings in main cities involves enormous government expenditure It would be more beneficial to spend this money to build new houses and roads To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include examples fr 84
- It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct e g Dinosaur dodos There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening Do you agree or disagree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ssible and you have to get on with it. On the other hand, I believe that most o...
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...spectacular adventures of the century. In conclusion, it is indubitably that un...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, sort of, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56402439024 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51659978237 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55487804878 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4609669157 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5625 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3125 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169812028705 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553041453276 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553534757167 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117237792897 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584857803567 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.