By common consent, tourism plays a crucial role in shortening the distance between people from different cultures. In my opinion, I profoundly agree with this view.
As a common trend to be seen, countries around the world take advantage of tourism to elevate their reputation and incomes via the uniqueness of culture and institutions. Therefore, tourism has been claimed as the most effective approach to connecting people from different religions. Tourists are believed to be appealed by magnificent scenery or the diverse historical culture of a nation. For example, by watching footage about old dynasty traditional garments, a number of million foreign people arrive in China for the purpose of observing it in person. These tourists said that they had discovered an Asian culture more comprehensively and to some extent, develop the desire for a second visit.
In addition, due to the tendency of international integration, people are free to visit other places around the world to widen their knowledge as well as fulfill the impulse of discovering. People are born curious about nature, hence, as the conditions are accepting beneficial, people will not despondent to pay a visit. According to research conducted by Tokyo University, a majority of Japanese said that they would choose a remote continent for the intrigue of their food, institutions, and lifestyle. Generally speaking, the rationale for attracting tourists is the difference between their nation's culture and others. Witnessing how Canada celebrates their New Year festival is firmly more enticing than seeing a recurring ritual in Japan.
In conclusion, the essence of tourism is to promote the distinctions of a nation which lead to the cut down in the cultural gaps.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, second, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in short, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96061275639 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623188405797 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2936739561 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.230769231 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280169932534 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928935362328 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612404943796 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163824987374 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310946956945 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.4 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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