some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give opinions
People have been polarized on the optimal measure to address negative circumstances such as unsatisfactory jobs or shortage of money. While a number of people opine that accepting these situations is the best solution, others advocate improving such circumstances is superior. From my perspective, I lean toward the latter view.
On the one hand, there are sufficient grounds to argue that accepting a bad situation can be a plausible solution. Firstly, people can stabilize their negative feelings when they struggle with those circumstances. It stands for the reason that those, having poor working condition or an unsuitable job are likely to be anxious or stressed, therefore, leading to numerous problems in their occupation, relationship, and cancer. Learning to accept those situations could enable them to avoid the squandered time spent to think about the problems, thereby retaining the positivity inside them. Another reason for this is that workers can have the power to arise and the spirit to work effectively. By accepting bad situations, people can find out the happiness in their jobs. To clarify, if all people in the world just accept working for their favourite occupations, there will be numerous employees being jobless, thus slowing down the economic growth.
On the other hand, from my perspective, I strongly endorse that attempting to improve such circumstances is superior. The main reason for this is that employees are likely to have better work opportunities. Such suitable jobs could enable them to enhance productivity, thereby finalising their work in a shorter time. It means that those can have more promotions and higher salaries, therefore, having a better quality of life. Furthermore, people can realise the value through difficulties existing in their lives. It stands for the reason that the one overcoming those situations can be thankful because they can learn numerous valuable lessons after struggling with difficult conditions. Take poor students as an example, those students tend to search for scholarships in order to save money and help their families because for them, studying might cost a fortune. It is true that to achieve this goal, poor students need to pour all their heart and tears into studying and after reaching those aims, they would be very thankful for their hard work.
In conclusion, accepting bad circumstances can alleviate the stressful and negative feelings of those struggling with them to some extent; however, it is superior to finding a more suitable occupation in order to boost productivity and have more promotions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2196.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35609756098 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88710439758 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529268292683 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 668.7 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5989061886 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.578947368 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5789473684 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47368421053 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20682436205 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730543135349 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722943415697 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153288210885 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10693990822 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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