Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation. such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage if money. Others argues that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Based on my knowledge, some people choose to accept the fate that they have to undergo the bad situations as they believe that good things might come out of it. Their solution is simply to just go with the flow because they think they will learn something new along the journey. For example, a student received a grade B for his Physics examination. However, he only needs one more mark to get an A. If a student requires to receive a mark percentage of 70% to get an A, this student got a 69% on his paper. As the teacher looked through the questions with the whole class, he notices that accidentally marked his correct answer to wrong. So, realistically, he should get an A. However, he chooses to leave his grade as an B because he believes that his current grade will be a motivation for him to improve and work harder to get a better grade in the next examination. Hence, this explains why some people chooses to accept the bad situation.
Besides that, it is also mentioned that others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. i believe they act this way is because they feel a bit paranoid that the situation will become worse if they do not do so, For instance, a person had to undergo a shortage of money. Logically, they will feel a bit paranoid that at one point, they might have to experience an empty pocket and had to live in the streets. Regarding that matter, they figured out a solution to improvise such situations by getting an extra or a part-time job. This solution will help them to gain extra money to pay their daily expenses such as water and electricity bills. This means that their problems are solved and they are now worry-free.
In my honest opinion, I strongly suggest that one can choose to act in both situations according to situations. When facing a problem, think of the best solution to solve it. If the solutions requires you to imply ignore it, then just do so. There is a no need in figuring out a way to improve those situations as it will take up your time and cause stress. However, if the situation requires you to take action quickly, by all means do so as you might not know what are the consequences if you ignore the problem.
In a conclusion, the main important thing when facing bad situations is to analyze the problem, only then you can react to them. Not all bad situations needs to be ignored and not all needs to be improved. Thank wisely to get the best solution for all of your problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: try to
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Message: Did you mean 'receiving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: receiving
...mark to get an A. If a student requires to receive a mark percentage of 70% to get an A, t...
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Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
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Suggestion: I
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, however, if, look, regarding, so, then, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 66.0 24.0651302605 274% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2171.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 486.0 315.596192385 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4670781893 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54320404996 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448559670782 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 680.4 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1605577651 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.84 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.44 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300141171744 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925898732487 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110390869938 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222803391657 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.187168820885 0.056905535591 329% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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