These days, the amount of people who are unhappy in connected with their job is increasing. It is considered by some that accept a bad situation in work life, while there are others who claim that it is better to try to achieve a job with high quality. This essay agrees that searching for a better situation is the best idea for having a good life. This essay will discuss both points of view.
It is clear that having a fixed job is individual willing. Some people fear of don't find a job and can't handle expenses. Hence, many people satisfy with their current bad job, although they are never had desired it. This essay disagrees that people have to work in unwelcome position just for this reason that they need it. Postgraduate students by low level jobs is a prime example, who work with shortage income rather than their high education.
However, many agree and feel dealing with an awful job is better than haven't it. In my honest opinion, there is a great number of individuals who expand their abilities and never give up. This type of people can increase the quality of their own life and also their family. They use won abilities and education for a better chance in a promotion and new experience. To them, if their current job can't be a satisfaction situation in terms of salary, promotion and etc, they will leave those companies. For instance, my friend has phD degree and too much experience in his job field. Last year he left his job because his salary was lower than a new person who had a bachelor degree and now my friend has a new job with higher earning.
In conclusion, while the benefit of changing job is so better for whom are unsatisfied and it is an opportunity to find a suitable job and guarantee their future life, some still feel that people should be wary of this act and should be accepted an unfavorable job based on their fear of losing current bad job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...ving a fixed job is individual willing. some people fear of dont find a job and can ...
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Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...individual willing. some people fear of dont find a job and can not handle expenses....
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Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'desired'.
Suggestion: desired
...nt bad job, although they are never had desire it. This essay disagrees that people ha...
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Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[3]
Message: Possible agreement error – use past participle here: 'desired'.
Suggestion: desired
...nt bad job, although they are never had desire it. This essay disagrees that people ha...
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Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...wever, many agree and feel dealing with a awful job is better than havent it. In ...
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Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...dealing with a awful job is better than havent it. In my honest opinion, there is a gr...
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Line 7, column 238, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'accepted'?
Suggestion: accepted
...hould be wary of this act and should be accept a bad job based on their fear of losing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, still, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45664739884 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32627183411 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505780346821 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4320947235 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7058823529 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3529411765 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.17647058824 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201901393931 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700756620967 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447859986452 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141434425831 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450694962382 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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