Dear Ms. Smith,
My name is Mania James and I am one of your student’s parent who studies at class number B. Her name is Julia. Last day I heard about 3 days trip to Germany which your school plans for students.
I am writing to inform you of my decision about my interested to join you on this trip. The first and foremost reason is that I lived in Frankfurt for 2 years, and I could help you in some ways because I know there as well as. Another reason is that I want to be by my daughter, and look after her.
As I mentioned above I lived in Frankfurt, I am a native German speaker. I could be one of your leaders, and I will take your group to attractive, and historical places which can have educational aspect for students. In addition to this, we can go to the natural landscapes.
At the end, I have some questions such as when your trip will begin? Where is your first destination? And I want information about the costs which each person must be pay. I am appreciated if you could tell me about them.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Mania James
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, well, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29951690821 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49998949798 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594202898551 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7181456806 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.3333333333 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 4.34317383033 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191558216211 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599738108502 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374044749333 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976733983246 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195135722286 0.0580467560999 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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