Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Many people find themselves in various unwanted situation in their life,like shortage of money or unsatisfactory job.While some people think that accepting an unwanted situation as it is ,is the best way to deal with it, others believe that one should focus on improving such situations to get out of them. In my opinion, I think that people should try their best and work hard to get out of bad conditions, rather than stay idle and do nothing about own's unsatisfactory condition.
On the one hand, some people think that the best method to handle the bad situation is to accept it and go on with it. This thinking pattern will relieve themselves from pressure and worries. For instance, if people are not satisfied with the pay from their job, then they will be unable to perform better in their professional career. Their work output will be slow. Instead of thinking and worrying about their job, if they concentrate on their performance and accept their working condition as it is, they will eventually be able to improve their condition. Also, they will avoid serious problems like depression by accepting their condition. So, coping with the bad situation is one way to stay happy and motivated all the time.
On the other hand, other people argue that accepting own's bad condition makes people lazier and unproductive. They should work hard to solve their economical or work problems and I completely agree to this. Trying to get out of the problems makes people creative , hard working and dedicated to their goals. For example, if some people are unhappy about their job, they should work even harder to enhance their qualities and qualifications to make themselves qualified for better job prospects. They should try and shift to new work environment and get to their desired position, which will definitely solve the financial problems as well. So to achieve their goals they should always try and think about ways to get reach to their goals. As a result people will be hardworking, their dedication level will increased an ultimately be happy.
In my opinion, I completely agree with the second statement and i argue that one should always try and find a way out of the unwanted and undesired situation. People should not just accept their bad situations, instead they should be hardworking and dedicated to achieve their goals and make their condition better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1983.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9575 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62688820914 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.435 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3204574044 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.166666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199154686343 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742485037077 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710620309807 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151354883939 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716331021632 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.